Thursday, 12 July 2012

Sister vs Sister


Story’s Profile
Story’s title              : Sister versus Sister
Story’s sub title       : Sisters’ Love
Story’s part             : 1
Story’s language   : English from English
Writer’s Profile
Writer’s name        : Nicole Yuri
Writer’s gender      : Female
Writer’s birthdate   : July, 4th 1989 (Age 23)
Writer’s story           :  Sister versus Sister
Story Begin
Sister versus Sister
Writer: Nicole Yuri ~NicoleYuristable~
Editor: Choi Yuna ~Yunaddicts~
~Part 1~
There is a big house with a full of loves. There are 2 twin sisters named Angel and Yuri with their chefs, drivers, maids, and secure guards. Unfortunately, they are orphans. Their parents have died since 3 years ago because of a plane crash.
One day...
“Angel, where’s my uniform. Did you see it?” asked Angel.
“Yes, I see it under that table,” answered Yuri.
“Oh, thanks! Why is it can be here?”
“Maybe wind doing that.”
“Maybe...”
After breakfast, they are going to their school by their car.
“Good morning, young ladies! Are you ready for your school today?” asked Mr. Brown, their driver.
“Yes and of course! I can’t wait it! Today is Minoru-Chan’s birthday! Yippi!” answered Angel with a lot of energy.
“Hey, I don’t know who Minoru is. Who is he? Is he your new BOYFRIEND?” asked Yuri.
“NO! NO! And NO! He is the most popular student in our school since Tomio-Chan out from our school. Are you don’t know him yet?”
“No. I think the most popular student is Yuki-Chan forever.”
“Yeah, whatever you think.”
“Uh...By the way, young ladies, if I may know, can we go now?” asked Mr. Brown suddenly.
“Please, Mr. Brown!” answered Yuri.
After they’re arriving in their school, Mr. Brown going back to their home with their car too. Yuri and Angel going to their class.
On the way to classroom, they meet Yamanaka Minoru, the most popular student in their school.
“Hi, Mino-Chan! Are you going to your class?” asked Angel with cutesy made-up.
“Oh, hi too, Angel-Chan! Honestly, I am going to the library now,” answered Minoru.
Yuri is very boring and so she leaving Angel and go to her classroom. Angel was surprised seeing her twin sister. But, she is doesn’t care because the only she want is to be the girl who closest to Minoru.
Then, Angel following Minoru to the library. Yuri has arrived to her classroom. Yuri is seeing Yuki Iwasaki, her classmate with a girl named Karin, her most bad classmate.
I must be the girl who closest to Yuki-Chan! That is I want! Yes!
So, Yuri is walking to Yuki.
“And so, we must have a surprise to him. Are you having an idea?” asked Yuki to Karin.
“Oh, I will think it, Yu-Chan! Bye!” answered Karin and goes leaving Yuki.
“Bye, Karin-Chan!”
“Hi, Yuki-Chan!!!”
“Oh, hi too, Yuri-Chan! Long time no see! How are you?”
“Maybe fine and maybe not. Since you’re gone to Perth I am very lonely. How are you too, Yuki-Chan?” asked Yuri with sadly made-up.
“Oh, I am sorry, Yuri-Chan! I am fine. To be honest...I am very lonely too because I don’t meet you least than 3 days, Yuri-Chan. So, I am very happy because you’re waiting me, Yuri-Chan! Thank you very much!” answered Yuki with ‘high-quality’ smiling.
Yuri very happy because she have got Yuki’s smile. And she is blushing. Yuki is seeing that.
“Oh, you’re welcome, Yuki. So, should are we entering our class?”
“Yes, my princess!”
They are going to their classroom. Let’s back to Angel! On the library...
“What book you will borrow, Mino-Chan? I will help you find it.”
“Oh, thanks! I am searching encyclopedic about animals now. Will you search it for me, Angel-Chan?”
“O...Of course, Mino-Chan!”
So, Angel and Minoru is searching the encyclopedic that Minoru’s search.
“BINGO, Mino-Chan! I found it!”
“Oh, thanks, Angel! Let’s go to the cashier and let’s go back to classroom!”
Finally, Angel and Minoru are going to their classroom.
“Bye, Angel-Chan!” said Minoru going to his classroom.
“Bye, Mino-Chan!” said Angel going to her classroom too.
At lunch time, Angel is sits near Minoru in table number 19. Yuri is sits near Yuki in table 22. Now, they are hostility only because LOVE.
“Oh yes, Yuri-Chan, if I may know, why are you don’t sit near A-Chan?” asked Yuki.
“This is because her faults to me, so I NEVER forgive her.”
“Ehm...Are you sure NEVER? How if you be forgive her again? Oh, I’m sorry! I don’t intend to interfere affairs of yours, I am only give suggest.”
“Hmm...I think you’re right. But, I think too I will NEVER forgive her.”
“Okay.”
Let’s back to Angel and Minoru!
“Angel-Chan, Yuri is your twin sister, right? Why are you don’t sit near her?”
“No! No! And no! That’s right, she’s my twin sister. But our relationship has been end.”
“Ehm...Why?”
“Never mind! You don’t need to know it.”
“Okay.”
[To be continued to part 2]

From Writer
Kon’nichiwa, all! Thank you so much to read my first story published on StoryCreator! Hope you like it and enjoy!
~NicoleYuristable~
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